Very cool! Everything is incredible. The only thing I'd recommend is making the timing and shots a slower as some do seem to be a little quick.
Also, how much interaction are you going to have between the characters and environments? The shot where the good guy gets pushed up against the table (2:02 mark) is where you can have the table shake. If you have time, maybe make the books fly off the shelves.
Also, at 2:04 when his hand brushes past his wound, in the same shot the camera can look up to see him grimacing.
Another note: The scene at 1:20 where his hand grabs the guy's shirt is a bit confusing. It's hard to tell if the girl or guy grabbed him by looking at the following shots. Maybe you can clear that up.
Everything else looks amazing! Gotta love the transformation scene of the bad guy.
Thanks Sean! These are really good ideas. I've been talking to Maks about animating falling books and stuff shaking. If you have any ideas for where the timing can be slower, let me know, because I agree, it is pretty fast. I've been trying to slow it down, but I've looked at this animation so much its hard to determine whats too fast and what isn't. I think when I put music in it will be easier to understand the pacing. For the scene at 1:20, you see the boy's green jacket, when he grabs the evil guy, so it will be easier to understand who did what when its in color.
Very cool! Everything is incredible. The only thing I'd recommend is making the timing and shots a slower as some do seem to be a little quick.
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Also, at 2:04 when his hand brushes past his wound, in the same shot the camera can look up to see him grimacing.
Another note: The scene at 1:20 where his hand grabs the guy's shirt is a bit confusing. It's hard to tell if the girl or guy grabbed him by looking at the following shots. Maybe you can clear that up.
Everything else looks amazing! Gotta love the transformation scene of the bad guy.
Thanks Sean! These are really good ideas. I've been talking to Maks about animating falling books and stuff shaking. If you have any ideas for where the timing can be slower, let me know, because I agree, it is pretty fast. I've been trying to slow it down, but I've looked at this animation so much its hard to determine whats too fast and what isn't. I think when I put music in it will be easier to understand the pacing. For the scene at 1:20, you see the boy's green jacket, when he grabs the evil guy, so it will be easier to understand who did what when its in color.
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